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Warriors Intro Comic - Page 2 by =Idess:iconIdess:


©2008-2009 =Idess
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Artist's Comments

Ugh, I felt like I really rushed this one so I could get it out for you guys :S Sorry for the shatty anatomy and everything else. Oh, and OMG BLOOOODD!! 8D
Oh, and errr Mousefur's color is actually much darker than it looks. The dark background made her look very peachy-beigish XD I swear, if you look at the color code, it's more mousefur-y

Again, PLEASE don't judge my comic making abilities by this. I have learned a LOT about comics and pacing, style, etc. since I sketched this in March. Now I am just inking what I have and coloring it quickly so I can finish this ' project' :P

Again;
-I am only doing the Introduction to "Into the Wild" by Erin Hunter. My fancomic is a total of 5 pages long, the first and second pages being the only ones done. The other are just sketched, so it may be another few months before page 3 comes out.
-I tried following every detail Erin Hunter describes. The dialogue is 100% exact. Go ahead and read along with the book; I tried very hard to make it as accurate as I can.
-Enjoy, but please do not steal! That means don't claim that you drew it, and don't erase my signature. I will find you.

Warriors story, characters, etc. © Erin Hunter
This comic is purely fan-made. It is not official and I am not being payed nor will I be payed for making this.
Art is © M. 'Idess' Sherwood

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:icon99koolio99:
this is wonderfull. i think you should do a lot more of these comics about warriors. love em!

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the sounds of cannons boom,
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and brake all the hope,
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art is a language........i love what you have to say.
:icons-tygian:
very nice! I think this is brilliant, and it reads really well =D awesome.
:iconmydarkfate:
These really do make Tiger[claw][star] seem like the hero of the story... But that's completely incorrect!!... I'm pretty sure people have noticed :D

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I don't want to be the one
Who battles always choose
Cause inside I realize
That I'm the one confused
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:iconsilwolffe:
"Make quick like the otters we shall swim."

I don't know why, but that's how I read it. My eyes kinda screwed up as they skimmed over it. :o

I like how your panels flow. You're doing a good job so far! :)

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-Enjoy, but please do not steal! That means don't claim that you drew it, and don't erase my signature. I will find you.

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:iconcopperdragonart:
Your Tigerclaw looks waaaaay better that the one in the manga books, much closer to how I imagine him myself. :D I'm really enjoying these!

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:iconforwardess:
Very well done - I've never made a comic either and need to do a little research myself before I finalize my pages and upload them on dA. I think is very well structured. Easy to follow and intriguing. I'll be looking forward to the next page ^-^

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:iconshimmeron:
lookin good :)

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:iconidess:
Rofl XD I was like "uh oh I made a typo!"
Thanks X3 As I said I've learned so much about comic making since this, so to me the panels are all messed up and don't flow well at all! :P

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:iconidess:
I agree, I found that interesting about the introduction :P But I suppose is sort of builds up the suspense and 'shock' when his treachery is revealed, so the readers sort of know how Bluestar feels. That's my guess x)

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:iconidess:
Thank you! I havn't read or seen any of the mangas with Tigerclaw in them :P I'm really strapped for cash so unfortunately I havn't been able to go out and buy all the new ones.

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